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She leaned towards the swing,
And her feets tiptoed with every oscillation,
Few little steps and she was seated,
Looked like a small,innocent world she had just created,
Enabled were her senses, smiles blossomed on her face,
Beyond the world of people busy in the rat race,
She made an arc, yet another arc, an yet again,
Her little hairs swung in unison, her face brightened with every oscillation,
A gentle breeze just escaped past her smooth skin,
The feeling was more than bliss,
Because she sat on the lap of her Father,
And her Father was her swing buddy!!😊
I could hardly say anything was stumped by this beautiful Father-Daughter Relationship!!
#IncrediblePie
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nice post.. 🙂
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Thanks Rashmi😊
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Arrey waah😊
You write very well,Vivek!
I loved the way you expressed this father-daughter relationship.
But boy! If you don’t mind,i’d like to make some corrections here🙈
Feets and hairs! Silly boy,it should be feet and hair! Don’t mind okay? Otherwise beautiful post! 😊
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Should it be? I guess you’re yet to see the picture depicted in it.😀
To be technical here, I have used ‘her little hairs swing in unison’ and I did not say ‘her hair’; there’s a difference my dear!! ‘Hairs’ can swing in unison, ‘hair’cannot!!😎
Secondly, ‘Feets do tiptoe’ and ‘Feet does not’!! So, lilly I am not so silly😊😎!!
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The last line made me smile.😉
But arrey gramatically there’s no word “feets” right? And hey!Hair can swing in unison,hair is not just a single strand of hair,hamare sar pe 1000000 hair ko hair hi bolte hain na,hairs nahi! Hair is already plural,just like we say sheep,not sheeps! 😅 Feet do tiptoe,foot is singular and feet is plural naa! 😒 Lilly still thinks you are silly! 😁
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Okay!! Lilly Jee! Take my bows🙌 and yeah Both ‘Hairs’ and ‘Feets’ do exist in Grammar. May be that my usage is a little erroneous!! Thanks for being an eye opener😊😊😀👍
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Haha! Lilly>Silly 😎😏
Feets can be used for feet of many people together,not a single girl!
Oh lets end this!I just hope you are not one of those “touch me nots” who mind every lil thing.I am sorry if you did,though.Pleasure it is.😊😉
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Yeah!! I am really happy to find a brutal yet sweet critic!! My pleasure Lilly: Yours Silly😀😊
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Brutal yet sweet,i would take that as a complement! 😁 I would keep a close check on your ritings henceforth,to appreciate and point out the errors as well.😉 Haaye,my silly? MY? 😁 Meraaa? 😍 Oh my god.😆
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Ritings or Writings!!😀😊 ohh!!My Lilly don’t turn silly, I have already occupied that😀😀😀😊👍
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Hahaha 😂😂😂 arrey that’s a typing error,i know the spellings of writing!! 😁😂
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Spellings😎😀
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😒😑 Silly>Lilly
Khush raho 😏
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Ohh!! Lily,There’s no need to bring ‘Pratishtha’ in between!! Or take it on your ‘Pratishtha’!!😀
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I did not take it on Pratishtha! Chill 😁 I got a new name,yay! 😄
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nice post
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Thanks buddy😊😊
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